Here's a link to some very enjoyable little reads: student essays. Little blurbs where students are trying to use comparison in their writing.
Here's two to whet your appetite:
Her face was a perfect oval, like a circle that had its two
sides gently compressed by a Thigh Master.
The little boat gently drifted across the pond exactly the way
a bowling ball wouldn’t.
2 comments:
Ha! Liz, these are fantastic.
Wow. I sometimes wonder if these are real, but the guy seems pretty sure they are. Wow.
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