Tuesday, May 08, 2007

Some enjoyable student essays

Here's a link to some very enjoyable little reads: student essays. Little blurbs where students are trying to use comparison in their writing.

Here's two to whet your appetite:

Her face was a perfect oval, like a circle that had its two
sides gently compressed by a Thigh Master.

The little boat gently drifted across the pond exactly the way
a bowling ball wouldn’t.

2 comments:

Laura said...

Ha! Liz, these are fantastic.

paula said...

Wow. I sometimes wonder if these are real, but the guy seems pretty sure they are. Wow.